Feedback 2

Here is some more feedback i received for my music magazine.
Possible Improvements:

• Add stroke to font on cover to make it stand out more
• Blur the outside of the main cover image so its not as jagged

Facebook Feedback

To get feedback on my music magazine front cover, contents page and double page spread i posted them on social media sites. One of these being Facebook. Here are the comments i received. 

Possible improvements:

• Change the red to a different colour in order to stand out more
• Make sure all text on the front cover is clear and readable
• Space contents page details out more so its more clear

Feedback

Here are the first drafts of my music magazine, front cover, contents page and double page spread. I would appreciate any feedback.

For example:

1) What age range do you think it is aimed at?

2)Features you like

3)Features you dont like

4)Opinion on the colour scheme